Saturday, 9 May 2009

4.0 - My Evaluation

For this course, we were put into groups of 3. My group consisted of Me, Luciana and Nomad. We were asked to produce an opening sequence of our own film. The genre was up to us, so my group decided for the genre to be Thriller. As we were doing a Thriller film, we were asked to analyse 1 or 2 films of the same genre, before we started to film. The one I done was called - "Flight Plan"- Starring Jodie Foster. (See blog post 3.2 - 3.2.4) However through out the period of completing all aspects of this coursework, including the basic tasks and various activities like for example, scripting, scheduling, blogging, filming and editing, I believe that there were strengths and weakness that we had as a group, during this production work. I will be using the results that I got back from the questionnaires that I handed out to 10 people - (to my target audience) , to help me write this evaluation and to help me to identify the areas that needs improving in the production that we have created.

I feel that the media product I have presented has both strengths and weaknesses, however I feel that between the two films I previously looked and analysed (See blog post 3.2 and onwards) were V for Vendetta and Flight Plan, but I do not necessarily feel that the similarities are as strong as, our production work.

However when considering representation of social groups, the overall product represented a young women in her 20's - working class. From the results of my questionnaire the majority were aged between 16-17. From the questionnaires, I had some positive and some negative feedback, about our product. 8 people answered yes to the question - Do you think the film is interesting and thrilling and 2 people have said no - but it was interested but it wasn't thrilling. Overall I do not feel the group has achieved what our original plans were, when it comes to the representation and the actual product as a whole, so this is something I will need to take into account and improve on, in future projects.

I feel that personally, it is likely that an independent cinema would distribute my media product in comparison to a multiplex cinema, which is more incorporated with Hollywood and films with higher budgets, and also an art house cinema, as I don't think it is a particular art filled film. Although I feel that my final production is good, and due to the circumstances where we had lost our work, and had to re-capture everything and edit from the beginning even though we could of done more to to improve it, I still think it was a good attempt. Personally I still feel it represented a low budget film -
as the target audience for this media, agree, 10 out of 10 people saying the film would be a low budget film.That is not likely to make a big impact due to the lack of famous actors and big production companies, and money overall, meaning advertisement would also be limited, meaning people are less likely to know about the existence of the product.

There was no specific age group that we targeted for this film. Our audience for this production was aimed for anyone who enjoys/likes watching thriller films. The target audiences responded positively as some responded negatively. For this question - What impression does my opening sequence give you as a audience? e.g. Would you like to continue watching the film? 6 people have answered yes - and have said the following:

1. The words on the screen have been chosen carefully to capture the audiences attention
2. Gives me the impression that something bad is going to happen
3. Gives me the impression that its going to make us audience do a sudden jump, whilst watching the film
4.Something had happened - but can't figure out what has happened until we see the flashbacks
5. A sign that something is about to happen
6. I'd like to continue watching the film because the shots, and way it was filmed has been planned carefully , although there could of been a number of different shots been used.

And 4 people had answered no and said
1. The film was good but could of been better in terms of the uses of shots and camera work
2. I am not a fan of thriller. I like to watch comedy films, but the sequence was alright- but could of been better - like the camera work and the locations
3. It wasn't good
4. Camera work was not good, I didn't like it because the location where the opening sequence was filmed could of been a better location.

Our group filming had a balance between positive and negatives, simply because of the difficulties we faced throughout our filming.
The opening sequence of our film and the opening sequence for "V for Vendetta" had a lot of contrast. One of them was the way in which sound was used, there were a lot of non-digetic sounds used in the opening sequence for
"V for Vendetta" for example when the fire accompanied the flame title of the letter "V" In our opening sequence apart from the digetic music accompanying the sequence, the rest of the sound was digetic, for example when the two characters - Maddy and the police man are having conversation in the police officers room- (in the interview room) One particular thing our group wanted to do was to put in non-digetic sounds for the flashbacks, however this didn't happen simply because there was complications during the editing process. In the opening sequence "Flight Plan" there were some similarities with our opening sequence, for example the audience is given information about the film, by the text that is shown on the screen, followed by the mysterious creepy background music. From the feedback I have received from the target audience, 3 people said that the audio and the screening quality could have improved.

Our group could have achieved more by improving, the way in which the scenes were shot and also the sound effects, and the use of titles within the sequence, so this is something that I would have to work on next time I come to work in groups. We addressed the target audience by trying to make the
production realistic, so that the specific audience could relate. Some of the target audience thought that more visual effects could have been done to improve the quality, while others as a whole thought that the words have been chosen carefully to capture the audiences attention, and others said they would of liked to hear voice-over reading the texts on the screen.

Through the technologies I have learnt a range of things,both on Final Cut Pro and E-blogger. During this project I have learnt how to edit a film by capturing by using a camera, cutting clips and adding effects. Blogging was also a new learning experience for me, as I had never blogged before. I learnt how to add a variety of images/ videos if i needed to illustrate a point I was making, and to show my technological skills. Overall I feel I have become more confident in dealing with most aspects of media technologies I used.

Looking back at the preliminary task I have learnt a lot of techniques such as different shots and camera angles, there is still no limit to the number of angles you can use in order to portray a number of point of views. The preliminary task had helped me to develop my confidence in front of a camera, as I was a camera - shy person before.

Overall during the production of this product, it has helped me a lot and given me a better understanding that some times everything will not run smoothly, and that you have to be patient, at all times whilst working with Final Cut Pro, and the Apple Mac's as sometimes things can go wrong. However relying on other members of the group was difficult - As in the future projects team work is something I will need to improve my skills on.

Shots of our opening sequence:


This is the titles for the opening sequence, which tells the audience what has happened to to Maddy - the main character- by using words on the screen. We used the fading technique so that it would seem more realistic, but could of been better with a voice-over reading the texts on the screen.

A shot of Maddy and the police man - questioning Maddy. The props used in this scene was a table, lamp and a tape recorder - As you can see highlighted with red and a red arrow pointing at it. This made the audience realise where Maddy - the main character was. An over- the -shoulder shot was taken, because we wanted to hide the identity of Maddy- until the flashbacks. This is because so the audience can start to wonder why Maddys identity has been hidden at the start, and makes the audience stay in suspense. A cutaway is used to show flashbacks of the night of the incident.
(See screen print below of some of the flashbacks in our opening sequence)



Below is a extreme close up shot on the chasers eyes, this shot is done so that the audience could see the aggressiveness and the anger of the psycho chaser.


Here, below is a shot, of an close-up followed by a extreme close up of Maddy's face expression- stating the fear of her face whilst being chased by the psycho chaser.




Friday, 8 May 2009

3.10.3- Results from the questionnaires

I have previously created my groups questionnaires for our target audience - which is people who like watching films in the genre of Thrillers- Requesting personal answers from my audience, helping me to discover areas of both improvements and strong points, and also our groups weakness and strengths during this practical production, and also helping me to evaluate my work for the evaluation section.

The questions I asked were:

1) How old are you?
2) What do you think about the film? You are in our target audience- Do you think the film is interesting and thrilling?
3) Did you like the opening sequence of the film? If not - Do you know anyone who you think might be interested in watching the film, more than you? - Why do you suggest them to watch the film?
4) What makes the opening sequence professional or not up to professional standards?
5) What impression does my opening sequence give you as a audience? e.g. Would you like to continue watching the film?
6) What else would you like to see/hear in the opening sequence that would encourage you to watch the rest of this film?
7) Do you feel the sequence could be improved?
8) Did you have a particular scene that you liked?
9) Do you like watching thriller films? - If not what is your favourite film genre?
10) How much money do you spend on watching films?
11) Would this be a Hollywood, Art House or a Low budget film in your opinion?
12) Please state any other comments below

After asking 10 people of my target audience, the results I received from the questionnaires were:

1) How old are you?
16- 17 = 6
18+ = 4

2) What do you think about the film? You are in our target audience- Do you think the film is interesting and thrilling?

Yes = 8
No = 2
Any other comments for the question above= 10

3) Did you like the opening sequence of the film? If not - Do you know anyone who you think might be interested in watching the film, more than you? - Why do you suggest them to watch the film?

Yes = 10
No = 0

4) What makes the opening sequence professional or not up to professional standards?

10 people said = The background creepy mysterious music so it makes it professional because it goes along the film and, makes us want to carry on watching it, because it drags the viewers attention into the film, and the fact that the interviewers face and the main characters face is kept hidden until the flashbacks

5) What impression does my opening sequence give you as a audience? e.g. Would you like to continue watching the film?

Yes = 6 - And have said the following:
1. The words on the screen have been chosen carefully to capture the audiences attention
2. Gives me the impression that something bad is going to happen
3. Gives me the impression that its going to make us audience do a sudden jump whilst watching the film
4. Something had happened- but cant figure out what has happened until we see the flashbacks
5. A sign that something is about to happen
6. I'd like to continue watching the film because the shots, and way it was filmed has been planned carefully

No= 4
1. The film was good but could of been better, in terms of the uses of shot
2. I am not a fan of a Thriller, I like to watch comedy films, but the sequence was good - but could of been better like the use of locations
3. It wasn't good- could of been better
4. I didn't like it because
the location where the opening sequence was filmed could of been a better location

6) What else would you like to see/hear in the opening sequence that would encourage you to watch the rest of this film?

1. A voice over would of been good- reading the texts that appear on the screen
2. Would of liked to see a use of different camera shots would of been interesting to see
3. The location where the opening sequence was filmed could of been a better location
4. The interviewer, the police mans face would of been good if we could of seen it in the shot
5. Would of liked to see a shot of the police station - so we know where its set
6. A voice over would of been good- reading the texts that appear on the screen
7.Would of liked to see a shot of the police station - so we know where its set
8. A voice over would of been good- reading the texts that appear on the screen
9. Nothing - I would of still liked to continue watching the film
10.
A voice over would of been good- reading the texts that appear on the screen

7) Do you feel the sequence could be improved?

Yes = 10
No = 0

8) Did you have a particular scene that you liked?

Yes = 7 people said they liked the scene when the victim was being integrated and the scenes where the victim begins to have flashbacks
No= 3

9) Do you like watching thriller films?

Yes= 7
If No please state = 3 = Comedy, Romance and Horror

10) How much money do you spend on watching films?

£0-£5 = 0
£10-£15 = 4
£15-£20= 3
Over = 3

11) Would this be a Hollywood, Art House or a Low budget film in your opinion?

Hollywood = 0
Art House = 0
Low budget = 10




3.10.2 - Specific Questions for Target Audiences

(a) Do you like it? If no, do you know anyone who you think might like it more than you? Why do you suggest them?

(b) I was trying to make this film appeal to target audiences that like watching films in the genre of thriller/horror - 3 things I did to address this were:
  1. Use of mysterious soundtrack
  2. Use of high paced flashback effects
  3. Use of over-the-shoulder shots to create attention

Do you think these were good choices? If so why? - Please state

(c) What impression does my opening sequence give you? - Does it interest you or does it cause you to lose interest in the film?

(d) Would you buy the T-shirt? Could this be a Hollywood film, Low budget film or an art house film? What makes you say this?



Thursday, 7 May 2009

3.7 Analysis of the opening sequence "Hide and Seek"

Analysis of the opening sequence Hide and Seek:

"Hide and Seek" is a opening sequence under the genre thriller. The sequence is about a young women in her 20's called Maddy, who is continuously being chased by a psycho. However at the beginning she can not remember, exactly what had happened at the night of the incident, as everything seems blurry to Maddy. However during towards the end of the interview between Maddy and the Police man - She slowly starts to remember seeing particular features of the police man.

Lighting- The lights were dimmed out to create a atmosphere of the interview room at a police station

Sound- Mysterious music is being played in the background while the film begins - Which makes the audience intrigued simply because they are waiting for something to happen

Mise-en-Scene- A table, 2 chairs with a lamp on the side of the table and a cassette recorder

Editing- Effects added to create the flashbacks. Transition from black screen then fades out from black into the scene where Maddy is in the police station- in the interview room talking to the police

Shots - Extreme close up on Maddy's face- especially focusing on the eyes, as it is stating the fear of Maddy's situation. - Close up on particular scenes - such as the scene where Maddy's face is shown being terrified and worried.
Actors & Actresses: Adam (Police Man) , Luciana (Maddy)
Who is the target audience for "Hide and Seek?"
"Hide and Seek" is for people who enjoy watching films in the genre of thriller/horror. It is also set for people who enjoy the feeling of suspense.
3 ways in which the opening sequence address the target audience:
  1. The opening sequence addresses the target audience by the film starting straight from the police station - where Maddy is being interviewed by the police man - This grabs the audiences attention - (who like to watch thriller/horror films) making them wonder why Maddy is in the police station - being interviewed by the Police man
  2. The mystery's music at the beginning of the opening sequence addresses the target audience as the music makes the audience want to continue watching the sequence.
  3. Before the opening scene starts, the audiences is given some words on the screen describing what is happening during the scene - black-background

Tuesday, 5 May 2009

3.6.1. Call Sheet

3.6. - Time Management Strategies - 3.6.2

During this production work, in order to ensure the filming of the sequence was on time and to ensure everyone included in the filming and editing process of the sequence was aware of what was happening, my group and I felt it was incredibly vital to ensure a filming schedule was in place to tell us what was happening at all times, and that when a member of our group was missing, we had a guidance, and something to look back at, to take on the next step. This was very useful to our group.

3.6.2 - Shooting Schedule & Editing Timeline


(Below is our groups schedule)

3.5. and 3.5.1. Script & Storyboards

This is a link to Lucian's blog where she has uploaded our groups script and storyboards


For the storyboards click the link below:

http://asmediacwluciana.blogspot.com/2009/05/35-story-boards.html


For the groups script click the link below:

http://asmediacwluciana.blogspot.com/2009/05/351-script-to-accompany-storyboard-hide.html